Ancient Snippet

This is from The Ancient--in this scene, Jeffrey has just seen his college lover    for the first time in five years--he's missed him terribly, even though he's 
tried to move on--

Bruce. His lover, his soulmate, his best friend–seeing him after missing him all day. Standing there holding him, those dark curls sifting through his fingers, his nose buried in them as he whispered his name, over and over. His hands roaming over that delicious body. Those eyes, glazed with need for him, love for him.  Lying in bed together while they held each other, listening to the nighttime rain falling like liquid diamonds in a soft patter–

Then laughing at the spongy, rhythmic drip-drip in the saucepan under the leaky spot in the roof.

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21 thoughts on “Ancient Snippet

  1. Tender loving memories. I hope we learn more — what parted them, if they get back together…

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    1. Yes, you’ll find that out; and the role the ancient, Alasdair, plays 🙂

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  2. Lovely imagery. 🙂

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  3. This is positively delightful, loved the tenderness between them

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    1. They have a tough road ahead of them, but they do love each other.

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  4. Very nice. Sad that such a lovely memory is just that, and not the present.

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    1. Ah, but is it still in the past???

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  5. This is beautiful, so tender and reminiscent.

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  6. Loved the descriptions in this.

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  7. So tender. Loved the sound of the rain and their laughter. A lovely memory.

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    1. Thanks for your comment 🙂 Bruce and Jeffrey fight through a lot for each other–

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  8. I re-read this few times, such a lovely, gentle and vivid scene. I hope it won’t remain just a memoty, with or withiut the rain.

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  9. The perfection of a moment incarnate–and yet instead of reality marring it, it only seems to make it that much more beautiful. I liked this a lot!

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    1. Thanks so much 🙂 Bruce and Jeffrey are pretty close to me 🙂

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