Talk Of The Town

Here’s a snippet from something else I wrote a while ago about an out and proud talk show host who has a guest on his show who claims to be a 600 year old vampire–

Craig looked up from his cup and into Carl’s eyes,  startled at the intense feeling of Carl’s soft cool skin against his own, and the low, commanding tone in his voice.  Carl had removed his glasses, and was staring into him with a look full of dark passion.  He blinked just once, looking closer. How could he have thought his eyes were brown?  The whites of his eyes had disappeared and they were totally blue, dark blue and green, deep like the ocean. There were bright tendrils of red and black drifting through them carrying messages meant only for him—messages filled with lust, desire, and infatuation. Fotor11089267

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20 thoughts on “Talk Of The Town

  1. Wow. The description of the eyes really drew me in — hypnotic!

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    1. They’re hard to resist–Craig is very close to getting a much longer look — I’m glad you liked it 🙂

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  2. Goodness! Something tells me the claim is a fact. Great snip! 🙂

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    1. I cannot tell a lie–yes it is 🙂 Thanks for the kind words.

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  3. Ooh, that’s an interesting one. I second the comment above. That is most definitely an amazing description of eyes.

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    1. Thank you 🙂 they do say that eyes are the windows of the soul—

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  4. Wow, I’d love to look into his eyes. I wouldn’t be able to look away. Great description.

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    1. How nice 🙂 Indeed, Carl’s eyes are one of his greatest weapons 🙂

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  5. Hypnotic…and a touch creepy, but in a good way.

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    1. Thanks 🙂 I was aiming for erotic and creepy 🙂

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      1. You made it! Love that description, very original.

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  6. I did love crafting those two–I missed them 🙂

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  7. Great description 🙂

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  8. Thanks 🙂 I guess there’s nothing like a sexy Italian vampire 🙂

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  9. Intriguing and just creepy enough to be fascinating.

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    1. Thanks 🙂 I’ll take creepy and fascinating any day ❤

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  10. Really nice description of his eyes sounds like those claims might be real.

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    1. Welll–okay, you got me; they’re real 🙂 Thanks for the nice complement 🙂

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  11. I love eyes! Fantastic description. 🙂

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    1. Thank you 🙂 Carl’s eyes are his best feature–and his biggest weapon 🙂

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