Sins Of The Sire

Here’s a snippet from my WIP–there’s some questioning among the friends if there feelings are more than friendly–

“I felt Carl was attracted to me too, you tell me if that’s true.”

Craig’s eyes grew wide, then shrank back into themselves. He thought about all the little cues that Carl gave, the little shreds of jealousy that he displayed. Had they all been for him, or had any of them been directed at Oz?

Is he in love with both of us?
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18 thoughts on “Sins Of The Sire

  1. Ouch, that doesn’t look like it will end well.

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    1. Well, I’m not exactly sure, but I hope the ending I have in mind won’t come at too high a cost to them 😦

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  2. Now that’s a loaded question.

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  3. Yes it is–this little plot twist came to me over the course of a few days. It’s tricky, though–Craig and Carl are bonded, so I have to think of a way that enables them to invite another vampire in if that’s what they wish to do 🙂

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  4. Ooo, what beautiful character development!

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  5. Oh, I like where it looks as though this is heading. I hear you on the plot taking an unexpected turn.

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  6. Thanks 🙂 It seemed like a natural progression for me–but we’ll see, I suppose, you know how characters take over —

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  7. Ah, the agony of trying to work out what someone else’s feelings are! 🙂

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  8. Yes indeed–it must be ten times worse when you’re a vampire ❤

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  9. Sometimes the unexpected little twists lead to some of the best plotlines. This look interesting

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  10. I agree–this will turn out to be one of those, I think. Glad you liked it 🙂

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  11. I love it when the characters take over, although they make us seek some very interesting solutions. Great snippet. 🙂

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  12. Thank you ❤ They took over in the last book, and still haven't let me go ❤

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  13. Intriguing. And I love the eyes shrinking back into themselves — what a great description!

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  14. Thank you 🙂 I’m glad you liked it. Poor Craig is still trying to find himself as a nightwalker 🙂

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  15. Loved the description. And very intriguing!

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  16. Thank you, I’m glad you liked it ❤ My boys do love a good tease 🙂

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