Jesse

This snippet from The Merchant Of Venice Beach is about Jesse, Tony’s clandestine boyfriend and the son of everyone’s archnemesis, Sherlock Palmer. tony and his friend Bartholomew have come to ask dear old Daddy for a loan:

. Jesse was gorgeous, the dark mahogany brown hair with sun kissed highlights, the lightly stubble-covered jaw that had scorched my inner thighs quite a few times, those huge brown doelike eyes, and that mouthβ€”Jesus. I suppressed a shiver. The best thing about him was that he honestly didn’t realize how beautiful he really was; he had a genuine nature, with a touch of fire under the surface. I should know about that fire, yes indeed; I’d searched that perfect body enough for it, every last inch of it.

And he really, really wanted to get away from his old man with every fiber of his being.

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20 thoughts on “Jesse

  1. Great description and that last line really hooked me into wanting to know more about the character.

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  2. Thank you so much πŸ™‚ He’s modeled after Jessica from The Merchant Of Venice ❀

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  3. Jesse is gorgeous, yes. ❀ So is Tony and I really fell in love with them as a couple. Thank you again for writing this story!

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    1. You are so welcome πŸ™‚ As soon as I ‘m done with my WIP, Dane is next–the MC in my m/m version of Hamlet πŸ™‚ I haven’t forgotten πŸ™‚

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  4. He definitely sounds gorgeous!

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  5. Thank you πŸ™‚ I chose not to have a muse for Jesse, just–in my own mind I think πŸ™‚

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  6. Lovely description! πŸ’•

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  7. Awesome description πŸ™‚

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    1. Awww thank you, that’s so sweet πŸ™‚ Glad you liked it ❀

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  8. Love that story πŸ˜€ I loved the Shakespeare play and love what you’ve done with the story. Summer’s DAy was such an exciting project to get involved in and I enjoyed all the stories.

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  9. Oh thanks so much πŸ™‚ I’m really glad you liked mine and all of the stories–it was a labor of love for all of us πŸ™‚

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  10. Really love the description in this.

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  11. Thank you πŸ™‚ so much, glad you enjoyed it ❀

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  12. Oh, he sounds so beautiful!

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  13. Why thank you so much πŸ™‚ I’m glad you enjoyed it ❀

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  14. Nice description. Love the last line.

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    1. Thanks πŸ™‚ yeah, I had fun patterning his dad after Shylock πŸ™‚

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  15. I have this on my kindle and haven’t gotten around to reading it yet. This was a lovely little nudge to do so…

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  16. Oh thank you, glad I could nudge πŸ™‚ all the stories are awesome πŸ™‚

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