This snippet from The Merchant Of Venice Beach is about Jesse, Tony’s clandestine boyfriend and the son of everyone’s archnemesis, Sherlock Palmer. tony and his friend Bartholomew have come to ask dear old Daddy for a loan:
. Jesse was gorgeous, the dark mahogany brown hair with sun kissed highlights, the lightly stubble-covered jaw that had scorched my inner thighs quite a few times, those huge brown doelike eyes, and that mouthβJesus. I suppressed a shiver. The best thing about him was that he honestly didnβt realize how beautiful he really was; he had a genuine nature, with a touch of fire under the surface. I should know about that fire, yes indeed; Iβd searched that perfect body enough for it, every last inch of it.
And he really, really wanted to get away from his old man with every fiber of his being.
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Great description and that last line really hooked me into wanting to know more about the character.
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Thank you so much π He’s modeled after Jessica from The Merchant Of Venice β€
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Jesse is gorgeous, yes. β€ So is Tony and I really fell in love with them as a couple. Thank you again for writing this story!
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You are so welcome π As soon as I ‘m done with my WIP, Dane is next–the MC in my m/m version of Hamlet π I haven’t forgotten π
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He definitely sounds gorgeous!
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Thank you π I chose not to have a muse for Jesse, just–in my own mind I think π
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Lovely description! π
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Thank you so much β€
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Awesome description π
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Awww thank you, that’s so sweet π Glad you liked it β€
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Love that story π I loved the Shakespeare play and love what you’ve done with the story. Summer’s DAy was such an exciting project to get involved in and I enjoyed all the stories.
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Oh thanks so much π I’m really glad you liked mine and all of the stories–it was a labor of love for all of us π
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Really love the description in this.
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Thank you π so much, glad you enjoyed it β€
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Oh, he sounds so beautiful!
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Why thank you so much π I’m glad you enjoyed it β€
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Nice description. Love the last line.
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Thanks π yeah, I had fun patterning his dad after Shylock π
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I have this on my kindle and haven’t gotten around to reading it yet. This was a lovely little nudge to do so…
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Oh thank you, glad I could nudge π all the stories are awesome π
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