Sins

Here’s a snippet from Sins Of The Sire in which Craig is waking from his rest so he and Oz can meet Carl at the theatre–and Craig discovers something unusual–

Eyes wide, he turned his head to see Oz on his side, his eyes still closed. He was shirtless, and the pictures and whorls of colored ink stretching across his beautifully muscled body were in full view. A few strands of Oz’s ebony hair had drifted across his lips, and if he were human, there would have been small puffs of air to make them dance. One inked arm was curved around Craig’s waist.

Acting on pure instinct alone, Craig jerked his own arm back and moved away, making Oz open his eyes. They grew wide, the whites disappearing into black as he scooted away from Craig in a muted panic.

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16 thoughts on “Sins

  1. Nice! I could feel their tension in the moment! β™‘

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    1. Thank you πŸ™‚ Craig thought he was Carl, but–I think he’s not totally sorry– (wink)

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  2. Oooh! I love the tension that comes with this snippet!

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  3. Thanks πŸ™‚ I think they’re all feeling it about now —

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  4. They both seem a little surprised here. I hope it’s a good kind of surprise.

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    1. It’s not really a bad surprise–Craig isn’t supposed to have feelings for anyone else but his bondmate Carl–it’s a little puzzling to them πŸ™‚

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  5. Great description of their reactions. In my head it was kind of classically comical.

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    1. Thanks πŸ™‚ That’s what I was going for; all three of them are going through this flux of their feelings–Ninian can’t help but rock the boat a little πŸ™‚

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  6. Glad you liked it πŸ™‚ How would you like to wake up next to a hot vampire ? ❀

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  7. My, my, what a moment! Well done πŸ™‚

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  8. Oh things went strange so fast. Great snippet, Kathy. πŸ™‚

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  9. Oh yeah–these feelings shouldn’t be coming into play at all because of Craig and Carl’s bond–they’re all wondering just what’s up ❀

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  10. I really like the descriptions in this.

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  11. Why thankk you so much πŸ™‚ I tried to convey Oz especially in an authentic manner–

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